Number 2 is good, but in all of them there's no balance in the horizontal lines that mark "business systems". Try move the lower line so that it is exactly the same distance from the bottom of the text as the upper one is from the dot of the 'i'. I think it will make quite a difference. Hope this helps!
Ok, before someone can review your logo, you have to give us context. What is the website about? As someone else has said, this looks like marijuana leaves. So if this is a logo for a "Business system" then this doesn't fit at all.
2nd is better than the others but you have to really re-think about the colours. They don't match at all. I would recommend you to use http://kuler.adobe.com
hmmz nice but the leaves are not suitable here with business system logo and 2nd thing u hav given four versions out of which three are luking the same only the background is changed and background varies with the websites not with the logos that was my opinion nywayz Gud luck thanx Shery !
nice stuff... like tobacco or something? but not kidding i have to say i thing that all letters must be similar height...
No I don't smoke You mean the size of UR and LOGO ? I just made UR a bit bigger than LOGO kinda to underline UR . Thanks for review
4th one indeed looks better / 2nd one comes 2nd. You could work further on them in your photoshop - and does the business require leaves / is it for green energy / environment? What is the philosophy for the logo - and how does it relate to your business? You need to jot down, what others would interpret about your company based on the logo - and perhaps that may give indication on what all needs to go in, and what needs to be dropped from your logo!
I dont like it much, the leaves dont fit, the font doesnt line up properly, nothing seems to be in line. Looks very out dated and boring. Sorry, not feeling this design, needs a lot of work Keep it up though, imporvment is sure to come.