Review My Latest Design

Discussion in 'Graphics & Multimedia' started by daniegb123, Apr 25, 2008.

  1. #1
    Hey guys,

    I just finished my latest design for a contest I entered. I think it turned out quite good, I made everything from scratch, (the bike and the cage). It took around 1hour and 10minutes to complete.

    Check the logo and variations below..
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    Comments and feedback appreciated.

    Daniel
     
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  2. twinklestar

    twinklestar Active Member

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    #2
    i think it would be good if caged and biker were also tilted for a more 3d effect on the font :)

    my opinion though. :)
     
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  3. mspider

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    #3
    Must be wb fonts but different...mor bikered :)
     
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    sydneyaus Active Member

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    #4
    The first one is the best. Keep it in one style.
     
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    #5
    the blue one is far better.
     
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    #6
    My preference is for the blue text. Could you do more with the text though as mpsider commented?
     
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  7. daniegb123

    daniegb123 Banned

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    #7
    I'll see what I can do with the text later on, thanks for the the reviews :)
     
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    asterix Well-Known Member

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    #8
    nice on , however when the logo will get smaller i think it will be issue :)
     
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    #9
    Is it me or does the bike look like it is floating in air geometrically? The cage also looks more than a house frame rather than a cage.
     
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    turntablist100 Active Member

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    #10
    the font colors are too similar
     
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    daniegb123 Banned

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    #11
    Well you can sort of guess that is what I was trying to do..
     
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    #12
    It falls on the "ok" category with me. The blue text would oughtta do it. Try using 3d-glossy color for the cage then use different shade of black on the bike. Making the bike and the cage the exact same color is not the way to do it, you see the cage becomes one with the bike and it doesn't overlap. The drop shadow (if it is a shadow) wont really do it for me. I really don't feel it. Make it lighter.

    You could use a little 3d effect.

    Just my two cents worth...
     
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    #13
    Wow, that`s really impressive. I like the plain gray and black one.
     
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    #14
    I agree, keep it one style... Looks more pro.. the others look like something a kid would do... so stick with the first one.. :>) Keep it up..:cool:
     
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    #15
    I like the blue one the best. Good luck!

    P.S. You should've watermarked at least, since you never know who might take your design.
     
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    c l a r i t y Active Member

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    #16
    Nice...but I agree w mr B...without effecting either the bike or the cage they run into each other...maybe a bevel on the cage? Nice work from scratch.
     
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    #17
    looking good. I like the first one
     
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    #18
    I'd go without the colors. Angle the font to match the cage. Plus, do something with the motorcycle because it's floating.

    I love the concept, though.
     
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    angilina Notable Member

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    #19
    I like the 3rd one.
     
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    #20
    really impressive.I like the blue one ,maybe you shall add some effect on text and it will be Awesome :) anyway good work!
     
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