Review My Laptop Flash Game

i hired a flash game maker for my laptop site, and he made me this game.
Can you review it?

http://games.notebookbox.com/

By the way, i will give gifts for the top rankers, like 1 month rapidshare account.
Can you advice me some gifts, what can i give to them like rapidshare account?

Thanks

 

I do not like your ad placement I think you should have some text at the top of
the page which explains the purpose of the site, and I think you should get a
logo.

 

I think the site could be more clear. Its not immediately apparent what the site actually is. Maybe a brief description under the site title would help.

 

The game is boring
What is the button "power by Google" in your footer for?

 

thanks any other opinions?

 

it's just too simple and boring, what's the difference if we pick another laptop brand?

 

The site should have clear information about it.But i think it is absent in your case.No brief description added.Moreover You need a better template and logo.Thanks.

 

The site need to have a clear structure to it i.e. what is it about, and it needs a better template and logo

Best of luck with the site!

Kind Regards

 

ok and more work it