Review My Landing Page

Website: http://www.domudahy.com/

Please review on the overall appearance and presentation.

Thanks!

 

Looks like a good standard sales page. I like your favicon.

 

Once it started talking to me, I started looking for the X.

 

There are so many sites out there that are similar to this site, some of them are legit
and some of them are the get rich quick schemes we hear about from time to time.
I think you need something unique that will site your site apart from the rest.

 

The "EZ2ONOW" in the head line needs spaced out.. it made my eyes cross and will discourage visitors from flowing through your sales letter.. which needs to not have every word in the "bold font." Try to stay with 2-3 colors max. I also surf with Mozilla and my pop up blocker blocked a missing plugin installation?

You will only get better. Go for it!

 

I think you just want to advertise, no?

 

So general site in online Marketing. I think you should try another way to promote your site

 

its nice but you should do something new as the style is common as others...
if you want more and more traffic i will suggest you to improve your design and use professional styles...