Review my landing page?

Please review the landing page I have created at:
http://www.w2gas.com/inetsafe.html

Thanks in advance, Im terrible at sales copy so anything or any suggestions would be helpful

 

I say remove that sentence about the bold red ones. The first sentence in black should be deleted to make the red words stand out. Besides that a better domain would be nice. Overall, it's not bad.

 

The headline isn't really effective for me

 

Design is nice and clean, usable tool and good colours. Your domain name could be a bit more relevant though.

 

I'd better make header as "Scan Your PC for Error Absolutelyu Free"

I think this adds a call for action visitor needs to do.

And where is the download form? Can't find

 

It's a very good landing page... Please provide some more space between the very first line and top border (5-6 pixels more)... that will make it neat i guess.

Ajith

 

Repp'd everyone! Thanks! Made changes, keep critiquing.... The download form is the "Free Scan" button.

 

The design and the layout is simple but it works well, for seo purposes you should
consider adding more keywords to the title of your page. Currently you have "Free
Download Today" you should consider changing it to "Scan Your PC For Errors
Absolutely Free!"

 

The domain name kind of threw me off though. Other than that is a nice-looking site.

Good job. ^_^

 

Repped! I added the change to the title as well.

I originally bought the domain to promote water4gas on clickbank, however that market was completely saturated, and then adwords killed the PPC advertising. Now im simply trying to use the domain until I can either sell it, find another use for it (fuel your w2 for tax time??) or trade it / sell it for a domain name which matches what I now market with the affiliate network Im in now...

Thanks a bunch to all!

 

i`am from malaysia,

 

The graphics and the over all site is very nice. The only issue I really see is you are asking the customer to scan his PC before giving the software name. Remember you are selling a product, make the name of the product more visable!

 

@nubridges
Thank you sooo much for pointing that out. I have added product graphic to the page, and have incorporated the name into the intro paragraph! THanks again. +rep to all who have helped so far

 

i think you better write "Scan your window PC for errors absolutely Free!"
Your design is nice, simply, i like that but your domain name is not good

 

Looks nice.