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Review My Landing Page

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by brand, Feb 2, 2011.

  1. #1
    Hi all

    I am have created a landing page for one of my mentoring special offer. Please focus on the design and content, and let me know which areas can be improved.

    http://design.xrchive.com/poster/2feb/


    Thanks!
     
    brand, Feb 2, 2011 IP
  2. pigpromoter

    pigpromoter Well-Known Member

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    #2
    Two quickies:
    - it's five FIGURE income, not five DIGITS
    - that Microsoft ARC mouse doesn't belong there
     
    pigpromoter, Feb 2, 2011 IP
  3. brand

    brand Peon

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    #3
    Thanks for the constructive comment :)
     
    brand, Feb 3, 2011 IP
  4. ComputerGirl

    ComputerGirl Active Member

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    #4
    For me it seams quite good ...
     
    ComputerGirl, Feb 3, 2011 IP
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    #5
    As someone else pointed out - it's 5 figures not 5 digits. Also, if someone is interested what do they do next? There's no sign up box, no further instructions. All visitors will just leave without doing anything.
     
    Ella Marie, Feb 3, 2011 IP
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    cdogstu77 Member

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    Just not that catchy for me...seems kind of blah. The text could be improved and maybe a few more images.
     
    cdogstu77, Feb 3, 2011 IP
  7. incognito1

    incognito1 Greenhorn

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    #7
    text is too large. Shrink everything so you can read and get the gist within a few seconds.
     
    incognito1, Feb 11, 2011 IP
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    #8
    you need to make the sites exambels in the footer clickabel
     
    Abdullah1, Feb 11, 2011 IP
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    hor3tio Well-Known Member

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    #9
    Great design. You have done a great job. Good luck with it.
     
    hor3tio, Feb 12, 2011 IP
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    #10
    Where is the contact page? where are the tabs. just one page is not enough. hope it helps
     
    Abhilash Sangamam, Feb 12, 2011 IP
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    #11
    it is looking prof. i like your design.
     
    Roxorloopz, Feb 13, 2011 IP
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    #12
    Very good professional work, color scheme is choosen as per your niche so i appreciate it
     
    bruce_clay, Feb 13, 2011 IP