Review My Landing Page

Hi all

I am have created a landing page for one of my mentoring special offer. Please focus on the design and content, and let me know which areas can be improved.

http://design.xrchive.com/poster/2feb/


Thanks!

 

Two quickies:
- it's five FIGURE income, not five DIGITS
- that Microsoft ARC mouse doesn't belong there

 

Thanks for the constructive comment

 

For me it seams quite good ...

 

As someone else pointed out - it's 5 figures not 5 digits. Also, if someone is interested what do they do next? There's no sign up box, no further instructions. All visitors will just leave without doing anything.

 

Just not that catchy for me...seems kind of blah. The text could be improved and maybe a few more images.

 

text is too large. Shrink everything so you can read and get the gist within a few seconds.

 

you need to make the sites exambels in the footer clickabel

 

Great design. You have done a great job. Good luck with it.

 

Where is the contact page? where are the tabs. just one page is not enough. hope it helps

 

it is looking prof. i like your design.

 

Very good professional work, color scheme is choosen as per your niche so i appreciate it