Review my landing page

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  1. drax2006

    drax2006 Well-Known Member

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    Hey man - your English is a helluva lot better than my French so well done you.:D Just glad i could help
     
    drax2006, Oct 17, 2008 IP
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    I had 10 minutes free so i've sent a PM with the main two paragraphs rewritten. UK english rather than US english though...
     
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    #23
    This is honestly awesome !
    Not a lot of people would have done that ! I've put the corrected paragraphs online. Thanks a lot ! I seriously don't know what to tell you.

    Cheers !
    Mensik

    P.S : Did some of you have compared the 2 LPs ? Which one is the best in your opinion ? Which one should I choose and modify ? Thanks a lot, you guys are great !
     
    Mensik, Oct 17, 2008 IP
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