Review my landing page

Well not exactly my page but a friend's ive been initiating to affiliate marketing. He asked me for opinions and possible improvements. The URL is

http://www.safe-reviews.org
http://www.safe-reviews.org/travel.html
http://www.safe-reviews.org/languages.html

What do you think?

Thanks.

-Bla

 

Looks good but that doesn't mean anything.

He should always make the site have as high conversion as possible and what works in one niche might not work in another. This is why it's important to test everything.

Page layout.
Colours.
Positive/negative headlines.
Different calls to action..
etc etc

 

Thanks to Blaric and JoseArmando.

This is actually my website. Blaric showed me some tips, and I made my landing pages. I would have like to know how to make it better, and every single comments posted here will help me to do so.

Thanks a lot !
Mensik

 

Too much graphic i guess. Medium web user wants something cleaner and straightforward. But all the gurus in here can avail better than me.

 

Thanks for the tip scubita ! By too much graphic, you mean all the skeleton of the webiste, or in the content of the page itself ?

I thought that builind a hole website instead of a simple landing page would be good, because it would might show to the buyer how serious I am in my business.

Was I wrong ?
If so, what sould I try like kind of graphic ? Do you have any LP's examples that might help me ?

Thanks a lot for your time and help !
Cheers !

Mensik

 

Well i dont know about conversion rates, but as a reader i found it hard to read because the text was too small.

 

Sorry to say but my review would sound harsh.

1) No clear defined path to sell your product.
2) First and most important thing, DO NOT DISTRACT Users with too much navigation. They will jump all over like monkeys and u will eventually loose the sale.
3) Every visitors has short window of attention so your page should be KISS- Keep it simple stupid.
4) Change colours, they looks too bright for a LP. Use natural colors.

I can give some more tips but i will leave that to your imagination.

 

I think the font size is very small.

 

u have used too much graphics than this page deserves. and yeah font is too small as well.
or else looks decent enough to me. Good luck with it.

 

Put a bigger font size, needs to hit them fast, and direct.

 

One of the best quotes I've made in DP

So true my friend, so true. If you don't grab visitors attention in 5 seconds, they're gone.

 

I think the words are so small and the page is not so eye-catching.

Good luck

 

Went to check them out, Unable to display page error...

 

Yeah, I just saw that...
I'm thinking about changing my Hosting Plan... It doesn't happen frequently, but sometimes the service cuts. It's not really...professionnal.

Sorry about that, I'll try to fix it as soon as possible.

EDIT : It seems to be fixed now. Sorry about that little cut. I've put the text size to 12px instead of 10px. I'm not sure about trying to modify my actual page, or if I should make a totally different one. Anyway advices about that ?

 

They look great in my opinion.
Only suggestion I could make is add a graphic to your home page.
Great stuff otherwise!

 

Looks ok, but general advice (that i ignored ) is to avoid mash-up sites as they dont convert well - single product single domain apparently works best, and, to be honest thats been my experience so far. Be interested to hear how you are doing as I also have a site that takes your approach. Small criticism, spell check - I found 2 typos and I wasnt even looking - you really cant go on about quality of the site vs others if you havent got the basic spelling right - just my 0.02

Good luck

 

Thanks a lot Drax !
I'll consider all your advices. The reason why there may be some mistakes on the website, is because my first language is French. I'll try to do my best about the mistakes, but sometimes, it may happen.

Another thing : after some recommended me to, perhaps, try a different structure of LPs, I've been puting online a totally different kind of LP, for the same product. As soon as possible (when my damn Hoster will be available again), I'll post you the link to that page, and then, maybe could you guys help me to know which one is the better.

About my English in these posts, don't be shy to correct me, or even to ask some precisions about what I'm trying to say. Sometimes, I may think my structure is good, but I may be wrong.

Cheers and, thanks a lot for your help !
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All right, everything seems okay now. My hoster is now available.
As I told you, I made another style of LP.

Here it is -> safe-reviews.org / competition / minisite.html (without spaces)

Which one between my original page, and this one you think is the best ? I mean, in kind of basic structure. When I'll know your opinion, I'll apply modifications and others details on the good model of LP.

Thanks a lot !
Mensik

P.S : Excuse me for the link, it seems I can't post them yet. But it's impossible for me to have some advices if I can't post them.

 

Personally I think this one is alot better. However I think you'll need to get someone to proof read it, because even though your English is very good there's still alot of spelling and grammar mistakes.

 

Ok, well, thanks a lot jm55.
It's a bit disapointing to see that the LP I've downloaded and modified in 5 minutes is more popular that the other graphic I've been working on for hours, but if you tell me that I've more chances to make profits with that one, I'll use that one.

For my English, I totally understand that it's not perfect yet, so I'll keep on working on it, and I'll try to find someone to correct my mistakes on these LPs.

Thanks a lot,
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