Review My Landing Page

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    So I am about to launch a new website for a client of mine. I am developing a landing page.

    http://www.lm-tek.com/almena/

    Does my site look professional? Does it call the user to action?

    The site is not done, I havent developed the other sections, just the main product page so far. (also to the products on the side are just space fillers)

    How does it look. Your thoughts would be greatly appreciated!

    Thanks
    AdvancedFuture
     
    advancedfuture, Sep 5, 2008 IP
  2. inzpiration

    inzpiration Active Member

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    Sorry to say you this man, but it looks boring, color scheme is somehow not working for me. looks to simple. And NO, imo there's nothing that makes clients take action. Just the simple "Buy no" bottom at the bottom doesn't work.

    Best regards
     
    inzpiration, Sep 5, 2008 IP
  3. HiTech

    HiTech Active Member

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    Well I would suggest you to improve colors on that page. They want to sell a product, right?
    You need to attract people, make that page a little bit colorful. Think about how to sell their product, website design plays an important role when you want to sell anything on the internet because you want to catch customer's attention.
     
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    I agree with what has been said thus far I think you should add more colors into the color scheme
    of the site. I also think you should add a few testimonials to the first page.
     
    kingofsanda, Sep 5, 2008 IP
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    Whats up on the horns and fangs on the products on right?
     
    ohmer, Sep 5, 2008 IP
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    dota Banned

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    iam confuse To review this
    anyway quite Good
     
    dota, Sep 6, 2008 IP
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    It's too simple for a landing page, You may consider to make it more attractive.
     
    samuro, Sep 6, 2008 IP
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    Outsource the work to someone that know about landing pages and design man, that way you can get much better results ;)
     
    inzpiration, Sep 6, 2008 IP