review my job site !

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    sitesmakers, Oct 29, 2008 IP
  2. Setimerenptah

    Setimerenptah Peon

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    Seems nice and functional, it is quite plain appearance wise but that's not a problem. Seems strange that the title of the site doesn't appear in a header, instead there is just an ad. I also expected to see some kind of flaming graphic because of the name.

    I think the text could do with a grammar and spelling pass, for example on the search bar it says "Over 1 million job offerts" this makes no sense should probably just read "Over 1 million jobs listed".

    The About page has similar problems "Flamingjobs.com has proven itself to be one of the best company over the internet with our easy finder jobs. Our mission remains to connect the best employers with the best candidates."

    This reads really badly. I can do a text re-write for you for a small fee, PM me if you are interested.
     
    Setimerenptah, Oct 29, 2008 IP
  3. sitesmakers

    sitesmakers Active Member

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    im from europe , my english not so well :)

    i will take ur examples till :)
     
    sitesmakers, Oct 29, 2008 IP
  4. river

    river Active Member

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    One thing I would definately do is to have your site title and logo in the header. Maybe move the top ad to a side bar.
     
    river, Oct 29, 2008 IP
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    terranox Banned

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    I don't know why you have an add in place of your header and logo...
    and the use of blue its weird too, since your site is called "flaming" which would be like red.
     
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  6. amiman

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    Looks nice and plain, easy to read and get around. But as stated above it needs a logo, header of some type. Good Luck with it
     
    amiman, Oct 29, 2008 IP
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    The design is not bad but you should put your logo in the header of the
    site.
     
    kingofsanda, Oct 30, 2008 IP
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    Although the design looks plain and simple, I think overall it is fine. Even the jobs listing are properly organized for easy search.
     
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    The site is easy to navigate and I like the use of colors. The color scheme does not get in the way. I would have the title and logo at the top and make sure the grammer and spelling are up to par.
     
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    Sitemakers,

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    amirulcyber, Oct 31, 2008 IP