Hello I'm new member here. I found this forum and marketplace, i sad woow is great place to sell my guide. But after 1 week after i submited my item in marketplace, I have no order no reply! I think the salles letter for my item is not good, because if i look to other items for sell, have a simple description without any pictures bold text or color text, maybe members from here not like this kind of description format... My problem is I'm a beginner in this area, I just find a method to promote my offline business, and after that I wrote that to share with other and earn some extra money... Special offer! Please read my blurb in marketplace and be honestly with me, tell me your frank opinion, my intention is not to attract your attention to my item, for demonstrate my honesty I offer you for free that item if you tell me where is my wrong ? Tell me your opinion here and send me a PM with your email address to get free my item that cost in marketplace 9.99$.
It's weak. It does nothing to make me want to purchase and download the guide. It just doesn't create excitement and keep my interest. It fails to create any urgency like I need this guide now and why I need this guide. What's in it that makes this guide a "must have"? The formatting needs work. The "about me" does nothing to tell us who you are. Why should we believe anything you have told us? It has absolutely no personal touch to it. Those cheesy, hyped up, downright ugly sales pages we are all used to seeing actually work. They draw attention, they keep the readers attention, and most importantly - create excitement about the product. The urgency. The "need" for the reader to get this [insert random product] right now! They are written to tell the reader what the product is, why they need this product, and the urgency to get this product now. They need this product. Usually offering some time limited deal. Some incentives of some sort. Creating the perception that the reader is getting great value - a fantastic deal - but they must act right now to get it.... Your presentation is just simply boring. I'm not even sure exactly what the product is, how it's going to benefit me, and why I should pay for yours and not something else offered by someone else. Give the reader a sneak peak at some of the info they will receive. I'm just supposed to blindly trust you, believe what you are pitching to me, that your guide is exactly what I need?
Hi, Thanks for your review and honestly opinion, for that letter I payed 35$ dollars to a "professional editor" I tell it what is about, the benefits for buyers and all details he needed, I'm not good to make persuasive sales letter, and more my English skills are poor because English is not my native language. In this case I don't have other ideea how to get a good sales letter. If you have any idea please tell me... And to keep my word send me if you want my item for free your email to pm.
Did you ask for a cheap price and quick turnaround time? If so, it looks like you got exactly what you paid for and you have no reason to be upset.
No I write my request and I ask for the price and dead time limit. What you think, how i can get something more good?
Price is not always indicative of the quality of the content you will receive. HOWEVER, more often than not, it's a pretty good indicator of the kind of writer you're dealing with and what their skill set may be. Did you ask to see some of their sales pages in advance? Had they even written any before? You said you 'told' the person about the product and what you wanted to say, when you should have given the person the product to use/try/sample so that they could write the sales page from their understanding of the product instead of from a third person perspective. That said, even if you hire the very best copywriter in the world, no one in their right mind is going to guarantee you their words will sell your product. Be leery of the ones that make these promises. If the product blows, it blows. And no amount of perfume on a pig is going to make it stink any less.
Do you have someone, with a grasp of the business your seeking to get into, governing your interactions with customers?