Review my Internet Marketing blog

Discussion in 'Websites' started by VukasinI, Aug 26, 2013.

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    Recently, I start working on my personal Internet Marketing blog where I will share knowledge I gather in IM through years. I used new version of Wordpress (3.6) and theme twenty thirteen for the first time. My impressions are very good about this theme, and I want to hear yours about my blog.
    Blog: FireProvedMarketing.com

    Thanks!
     
    VukasinI, Aug 26, 2013 IP
  2. BoonPeng

    BoonPeng Greenhorn

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    I can barley read the "Recent Tweets". Need to change the colour.

    Maybe add a light border the article's image. As the for example the Twitter image doesn't look good as it's just cut at the top and bottom.

    Might want to shorten the "article preview", to a few lines or a paragraph. Don't want to overload your readers and turn them away.

    Maybe change "Contact Us Page" to "Contact Me". Also on your contact page, you seem to have a Google Map. That doesn't show any information. (such as: where your located).
     
    BoonPeng, Aug 30, 2013 IP
  3. Kerry Burke

    Kerry Burke Greenhorn

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    Hi
    I think the overall design and layout of the website is good. The wordpress theme works well with what you blog is relative to. My only criticism of the site is the wording on some of your articles. English is obviously not your first language and what you have done in terms of writing in a foreign language is fantastic, however, some parts do not read very well.
    If you are interested you could reword the opening paragraph to this to make it read better:

    I would like to answer this question by presenting you with a simple and short guide to show you how you can use the power of JustRetweet to expand your social presence. Here are some basic instructions that will help you spread the word about your blog on Internet and Social Media profiles like Google+, Facebook and Twitter.
    Head over to JustRetweet, login with your Twitter account. Once you have signed in, get 100 bonus credits. This amount is probably to low to spend immediately and your effect won’t be strong. So what do you next? You can earn credits if you retweet or like pages on Facebook. When you are logged in, you will probably see the list of featured users who you can follow on Twitter and earn credits fast. Below the list of featured users, you will see content that has been submitted to JustRetweet. If you decide to retweet, like or plus someone’s message, you will then receive an amount of credits set by the person who has submitted that content. The minimum credit per message is 10 and the maximum is 100. Try not to always search for more credits but for relevant content in your niche.

    By changing some wording in the opening paragraph that all people who visit your site will see should help you out a bit. Other than that its a great site.
     
    Kerry Burke, Aug 31, 2013 IP
  4. VukasinI

    VukasinI Well-Known Member

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    I changed Twitter feed a little bit. Now it is much easier to read. Google map is set very well. I will change Contact us page to Contact me, this was automatic. I would like to shorten my articles on the first page, I instaled the plugin but it isn't working. I must look what is wrong.
     
    VukasinI, Sep 1, 2013 IP
  5. VukasinI

    VukasinI Well-Known Member

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    Yeah, as you can see english isn't my first language. Thanks for your help, I changed the first paragraph. At least it is better to write my own articles then to copy someone else's.
     
    VukasinI, Sep 1, 2013 IP
  6. Kerry Burke

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    Couldn't agree more!
     
    Kerry Burke, Sep 1, 2013 IP
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