Review my Human Resources website

Discussion in 'Websites' started by leon, Nov 23, 2006.

  1. #1
    Hi -

    I have learned tons from digitalpoint and tried a few (unsuccessful) adsense sites a few months ago. I am back doing something a little more down my alley, which is using a website to support sales. We are selling a completely unique solution for the California midmarket HR market that includes an HR information system, prepaid legal, and employment liability insurance all bundled together and delivered on a monthly basis.

    Site Purpose:

    1. Convey professionalism & legitimacy when provided as part of a face-to-face & outbound calling sales strategy.
    2. I would like to generate leads if possible using Adwords or some other mechanism for people in the california market by enticing them to request a free demo or a free HR compliance review.


    What do you think?

    www.workforce-focus.com
     
    leon, Nov 23, 2006 IP
  2. leon

    leon Guest

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    I should also mention that I am putting a price-point on the page for incoming clicks from adwords... that is, people that are actively looking for something that I can provide I figured may be interested in seeing a price-point... as this is one of the big frustrations that I have with buying business services ---- no idea what price is until you get some high pressure sales pitch.

    so incoming folks see the price point at:

    http://www.workforce-focus.com/ourUniqueSolution.html

    Do you guys think this is a good idea?
     
    leon, Nov 23, 2006 IP
  3. Kassi

    Kassi Peon

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    Easy, clean, but it can be improve font wise definitely! Start with the logo and menu. Try to create something that almost everybody likes.
     
    Kassi, Nov 24, 2006 IP
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    Thank you so much for your comments Kassi ---- it is nice to get an opinion from some fresh eyeballs. What fonts do you recommend? I liked verdana because it is unique and large... maybe just go with arial instead?

    Now that you mention it, the font looks way too big and cartoonish on the menu... probably a smaller arial will work better there.
     
    leon, Nov 24, 2006 IP
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    its pretty easy and readable, as long as it conveys the message to the target audience no real need for any more changes,

    simple and nice, background gradient is cool gives some glow to the site
     
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