Review my HomeBusiness Blog

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by akira07, Mar 17, 2008.

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    I will place my ads at this blog but there is no high traffic yet. Please review it and give it your comment.

    This is the link :
    CLICK HERE
     
    akira07, Mar 17, 2008 IP
  2. heakset

    heakset Peon

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    Wow, that is a little too dark and you should stick too a color scheme. The way it is set up now it makes it hard to see the content.
     
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  3. tankard

    tankard Well-Known Member

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    What does "Arsip Blog" mean? It doesn't tell me anything. If the blog is about making dough, you should tell so. The blog title shoud speak for the blog and give the visitor the first impression!

    Now, this shoutbox. Last time one friend of mine installed a shoutbox, he was dropped from GG results by around 100 positions. There is a rumour going 'round that search engines doesn't partucularly enjoy shoutboxing.
     
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    Algert Well-Known Member

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    wow to much contrast ! that black colour hurts me eyes . try a different color scheme
     
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    First of all, if you are serious about this blog-thing, you should consider getting your own hosting/domain. It is the best solution on the long-term.

    The current design: I don't like the font, nor the color of the headlines (that greenish color hurts my eyes).
    I personally am not a fan of black background, especially for a blog, so I won't say that I don't like "your" black, since this opinion would be biased, somewhat.

    Anyway, I'd advise you to try a dark-on-light color scheme (white/gray/lighter color background, that is)
     
    hts, Mar 17, 2008 IP
  6. akira07

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    umm...ok i think it is dark too...because at my previous design, people say that is too "colourfull and eyecatching" so i try to make it black, ok i will think about color and font.


    ARSIP BLOG? Do you see an indonesian languange there? because i'm in indonesian. How to setting to appearing english languange????

    Oke, how about content? Not bad?
     
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    Find more attractive theme (the black and white is to plain), decorate a little bit with pictures. Arsip Blog? maksudnya Archives ya?:)
    Sebelum log in di blogger set ke english di bag kanan atas.
     
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  8. LifeNearPhilly

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    Try to center your top header and make sure you work on the color scheme and match your ads to that scheme so they don't stick out so much (in a negative way)
     
    LifeNearPhilly, Mar 18, 2008 IP