[Review] My hobby trip is making cartoons from faces

I need some kind feedback from all of you. Here is an image that I made, and I will update it in the comments column.

I need a review, what is lacking in my ability to draw cartoons and moral support to become a reliable cartoon design.

You can find it here: Contoh Desain

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Thank's You All!!

 

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hi all, i have updated!

 

Hi mate) Looking great, is this a part of some marketing campaign?
I guess you can do the same for a lot of companies

 

Yea, but now i don't think about it. Maybe future!

 

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i am here again!

 

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Hola Hola