Review My Health Insurance CPA Website

Discussion in 'Websites' started by marketingmaven, Feb 21, 2009.

  1. GaryEarle

    GaryEarle Peon

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    Hi...well..the first I looked at were the keywords you are targeting..damn...youre going after some fairly competitive ones! Is this a squeeze page that you are driving traffic to through pay per click?

    And if it is a squeeze page....you need to sell it more! Five sentences doesn't convince me to give you any information. You can sell more..and still have everything above the fold.

    Thats the first step I would take...write some nice copy...ie..Health insurance these days is a critical need to protect you and your family. Granted, we may not always have the time to sit down and shop for a better plan with our busy lifestyles.........get into the minds of people who land on that page....its called empathy...

    Just my opinion
    Gary
     
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  2. MidGe48

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    Ok, I tried to review your site. Unfortunately the only way to do so was to answer the questions. As a customer, or a prospective one, I would like a bit more information before I start giving mine away. I suspect lots of people would be the same.

    Since there is no indication of the area covered (US I presume, may be Canada too?), what did I need to do, or anyone else needs to do for that matter, before realising it was an irrelevant site?

    The first page looks OK.
     
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  3. 2advance

    2advance Well-Known Member

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    Add the logo in home page. The zip code accepts only 5 digits but I have 6 digits zip code to enter there for right place. I think your insurance will market only the selected countries.
     
    2advance, Feb 22, 2009 IP