Review my Health Blog

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by jezzz, Jul 1, 2008.

  1. #1
    Hey!
    Guys

    Please review my new health blog. Its my first attempt on Health Niche! i hope to make most of use in future

    http://www.healthonplus.com

    Also! do give comments and suggestion for site


    Thanks

    Regards
    Jez
     
    jezzz, Jul 1, 2008 IP
  2. abt123

    abt123 Member

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    It's ok. Good starting point.
     
    abt123, Jul 1, 2008 IP
  3. Stan Victor

    Stan Victor Well-Known Member

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    #3
    Good looking and nice work
     
    Stan Victor, Jul 30, 2008 IP
  4. viceroyyy

    viceroyyy Peon

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    i like colors of your site, good decision
     
    viceroyyy, Jul 30, 2008 IP
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    #5
    The design and layout are good but I think you need to proof/edit your articles a little better.

    Take this
    How it should read IMHO is: Nowadays, there is an increase in people who are suffering with asthma and allergies, even though they have not been affected by these diseases in the past. The major reason more patients are affected is because their lungs are not such clean and smooth to breathe it easily (I'm sorry but I don't understand this sentence at all). The physical environment is also important for us. The EPA identifies that a cleaner environment and surroundings can reduce allergies and asthma problems.

    I think you have a great concept and are on the right road.
     
    Jeccles, Jul 30, 2008 IP
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    #6
    great design.
    I like the colors, too
     
    frozax, Jul 30, 2008 IP
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    technolarity Well-Known Member

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    Looks Great.
     
    technolarity, Jul 30, 2008 IP
  8. jezzz

    jezzz Notable Member

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    Thanks Guys! I hired someone to write articles for my site thats why some mistakes out there in content :)
     
    jezzz, Aug 11, 2008 IP