Review mY health and beauty banner

Discussion in 'Graphics & Multimedia' started by Jalpari, Jan 6, 2008.

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    Review My banner and give suggestions how i can improve it ? What mistakes i have done?

    Is #666666 color for description is ok or in which color do i need to change it?

    CLICK HERE!
     
    Jalpari, Jan 6, 2008 IP
  2. asterix

    asterix Well-Known Member

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    slowdown the frame changing rate . makes it quiet very tough to read a present i feel .
     
    asterix, Jan 6, 2008 IP
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    eddie43302 Well-Known Member

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    Yes slow the frame rate down to about a count 1001,1002, change on about 1003 have it switch to another ad.
     
    eddie43302, Jan 6, 2008 IP
  4. Jalpari

    Jalpari Notable Member

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    Thx for ur comments any other suggestion?
     
    Jalpari, Jan 7, 2008 IP
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    #5
    frame changes are very discrete, make the animation a little more smooth..increasing the no of frames can be helpful...:)
     
    techie_mishra, Jan 7, 2008 IP
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    Lethal7 Active Member

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    increase frames and try separate text and color animation.
     
    Lethal7, Jan 7, 2008 IP
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    Nikolas Well-Known Member

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    It is still too fast to read. The banners are nice and the messages are good but it is very annoying trying read them. A possible client must be relaxed when entering your site :)
     
    Nikolas, Jan 7, 2008 IP
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    I'm not sure about the color palette for a banner that is targeted at getting women to click it for beauty and makeover tips. Then again, I'm not female so I wouldn't be the target audience.
     
    eric281, Jan 7, 2008 IP
  9. Jalpari

    Jalpari Notable Member

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    Now ppl r more aware and males also think about beauty.
     
    Jalpari, Jan 10, 2008 IP
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    blazwww Well-Known Member

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    #10
    i like your banner !

    nice job
     
    blazwww, Jan 10, 2008 IP
  11. Jalpari

    Jalpari Notable Member

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    thanks for ur comments
     
    Jalpari, Jan 10, 2008 IP
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    #12
    the graphics and text look great, but i agree that the transitions should be a lot slower so people can read the info
     
    FB101, Jan 10, 2008 IP
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    I love the ads colors and the differnt mix of Photos with each design. The only thing I would say is to slow down the transitions of the frames as they said above. Great job on it!
    Maemae
     
    maemae, Jan 10, 2008 IP
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    It looks great. Obviously, the frame rate needs to be X2
     
    jams44, Jan 12, 2008 IP
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    Guys think about beauty? Maybe, but they don't call it that. Just make sure you pick a very specific target market and go after it. Don't try to reach everyone with every ad.
     
    eric281, Jan 13, 2008 IP
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    Jalpari Notable Member

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    Hey ! i am not trying to reach male audience but i can't block them for viewing my web. Sure more females will be my user.
     
    Jalpari, Jan 17, 2008 IP