Review my grammar please I'm not good in English

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  2. methodspedia

    methodspedia Well-Known Member

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    hey sirtiman,

    I have gone through your site, I could find grammar mistakes, like "It's been along time that I haven't wacthing tv"
    it should be "I have not been watching tv" a present participle followed by "be, is was, are , were, or been".

    Other wise it is good looking site.
     
    methodspedia, Feb 20, 2010 IP
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    the domain is very long, the design is all over the place and theres no logo
     
    webmaster flex, Feb 20, 2010 IP
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    Just a few.....

    I have a friend that ask me for help for finding the information about tickets. My friend doesn’t like using internet to get information about what he needs which are Jeff Dunham tickets, APOLLO THEATER TICKETS, and Hollywood Bowl Tickets. I like helping my friend because he is very nice guy. I often get free lunch after helping him. I asked..

    "I have a friend that asked me for help finding the information about tickets.
    My friend doesn't like using to get information. In this case he is looking for Jeff Dunham ticket at the Apollo Theater. ........

    mainly structure changes......

    Sorry but the rest would take too long.....good luck..
     
    JimGee, Feb 20, 2010 IP
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    lkushi01 Peon

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    banned? what happen
     
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    try to change background color it will be look better.
     
    Solomon sg, Feb 26, 2010 IP
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    if you use ms.word? there you can find tools that can help you
     
    actmale, Feb 26, 2010 IP