Review My GF Squidoo Lens!

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    brushfire55, Feb 6, 2008 IP
  2. Cryogenius

    Cryogenius Peon

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    I had a look, and I was pleasantly surprised. You have a nice balance of text, pictures and products, and the poll and guest book is a great way to include the readers in the content. Nicely done.

    If you (or your GF) were to post on the SquidU.com forum, you'll be able to get some more feedback.
     
    Cryogenius, Feb 26, 2008 IP
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    Under "Hi, I'm Kyani_Success" then you click "more" and it shows like 5 more words. That was kind of annoying you might want to fix that. Overall I really like the design. The Google ad on the right looks a little out of place, but not a huge deal.
     
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    good writing! nice lens anyway
     
    deadmediafm, Feb 27, 2008 IP
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    Very good writing...Good work :)
     
    xcelent88, Feb 27, 2008 IP
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    Lens seems good; all that you could do to improve it would be add more content.
     
    NickG7, Feb 27, 2008 IP