Review my game blog!

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    lfcfan, Jan 3, 2007 IP
  2. 8everything

    8everything Peon

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    #2
    The layout looks too generic... I'm not too big on the header design, but it's good for SEO reasons.

    Try centering the text:
    Free online games! Free egames! Free Action games!
    Free RPG games!

    so it looks better :)

    The content for the site is great though, which is the only thing that really matters!
     
    8everything, Jan 3, 2007 IP
  3. lfcfan

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    #3
    hey...thanks...
     
    lfcfan, Jan 3, 2007 IP
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    #4
    good work.but dark green colour doesnt go with dark background.

    Abhilash.
     
    ecolatur, Jan 4, 2007 IP
  5. ewriter

    ewriter Banned

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    #5
    Its really good but you should choose different coloe theme. Everything else looks cool.

    All the best
     
    ewriter, Jan 4, 2007 IP
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    #6
    I know your header is good for SEO purposes, but I would personally change it to:

    Free egames, action games and RPGs...or something similar.

    When you write, you should ultimately write for your readers, not the bots. People can see right through that and it turns them off.
     
    MorgansMom, Jan 4, 2007 IP
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    #7
    looks like you got an error or two you might want to fix, but I think you actually have some good content. I might suggest finding an Xbox theme or something for your site that might help it look better and more "gamey"
     
    Jirsh, Jan 4, 2007 IP
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    #8
    Nice colors. Try to make the header more interesting adding some graphic collage or simple/aqua gradient.
     
    Kassi, Jan 5, 2007 IP
  9. MorgansMom

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    What's with the keywords in every post? It looks really spammy and Google (or other search engines) might think it's fishy.
     
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    #10
    Quite thanks for your reviews. All your advices are taken. Changing things one by one.

    Regarding keywords: I just wanted to increase the keyword density by giving relevant words to each game. If it is kind of scam/cheating google, I will remove them...
     
    lfcfan, Jan 5, 2007 IP
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    I would remove the keywords, whether it is spamming google or not. You want to appeal to your readers, and stuffing each post with the same keywords will seem strange for the average visitor.

    I would try adding more relevent content for SEO purposes. The more content you have, the more opportunities to add keywords and phrases in a natural way.
     
    MorgansMom, Jan 5, 2007 IP
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    Of course wat u say is true. I will add some content to all the games....
     
    lfcfan, Jan 6, 2007 IP