Hello everyone, I recently updated my pr1 website http://www.favoritetraffic.com/ and would like some reviews/suggestions/comments/concerns. Thanks in advance!
I would replace the headline and first paragraph with something like this... Are you looking for targeted traffic? Do you want to be top on Google Search Engine? read on and we'll show you how... There's too much fluff you just need to get to the point.
The next paragraph starts.. "Before you read the rest of our guide, you probably want proof it works", if they are thinking that then you don't need to mention you know. What I would do here is rather than talk about a sister site, put in a testimonial from them,... along the lines of, "since visiting *** and using their techniques we are now top or second on Google's search etc. etc."