Review my flash website

Discussion in 'Websites' started by amirsalmani, Oct 22, 2009.

  1. #1
    Hey Guyz,

    Please review my new Flash Website.

    It's not complete though but this is how will be theme. Alot of work is left now like Navigation, Home page introduction etc.

    My website URL is http://brim.in

    Thanks
     
    amirsalmani, Oct 22, 2009 IP
  2. Xavier_3D

    Xavier_3D Well-Known Member

    Messages:
    1,299
    Likes Received:
    25
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    140
    #2
    Well personally. The site loading times are a little slow, plus I'm not sure why you not making use of the rest of the available page. Its good, but it looks more like a modified template. The overall design gets an 8 though.
     
    Xavier_3D, Oct 22, 2009 IP
  3. philippe2803

    philippe2803 Peon

    Messages:
    38
    Likes Received:
    1
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    #3
    it looks ok for me, but I'm not a fan to the content showing just in a little box in the middle.
    Design wise, it looks definitely good.
     
    philippe2803, Oct 22, 2009 IP
  4. Matisoft

    Matisoft Greenhorn

    Messages:
    66
    Likes Received:
    1
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    18
    #4
    I think the box in the middle is too little. I would like bigger layout, because my monitor is 1680x1050 rez and site looks so small..
     
    Matisoft, Oct 22, 2009 IP
  5. higreg7

    higreg7 Peon

    Messages:
    469
    Likes Received:
    3
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    #5
    Nice and clean. You'd need to listen for you MOUSE_UP event outside of your text area though. Currently, if you press the scroll button, and release the mouse outside of the text area, your scroll button is still bound to the mouse. This site looks like it is coded in AS3, and unfortunately they took out the onReleaseOutside method in AS3, what you need to do is add this inside your drag function:

    e.target.parent.stage.addEventListener(MouseEvent.MOUSE_UP, stopDrag, false, 0, true);

    That will listen for the stage MOUSE_UP event.

    ;-)
     
    higreg7, Oct 23, 2009 IP
  6. quicknoted

    quicknoted Member

    Messages:
    72
    Likes Received:
    0
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    41
    #6
    it takes quite sometimes for the loading..overall just fine..good luck!!
     
    quicknoted, Oct 23, 2009 IP
  7. netdriver788

    netdriver788 Well-Known Member

    Messages:
    3,343
    Likes Received:
    74
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    158
    #7
    It was very slow in loading and in designwise not bad.The content is less now and need to work on that.
     
    netdriver788, Oct 23, 2009 IP
  8. amirsalmani

    amirsalmani Active Member

    Messages:
    292
    Likes Received:
    2
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    53
    #8
    Hi Everyone,

    Thank you so much for all you review, first of all i would like to say that this layout is not modified and completely designed and animated by me although coded by my Scripter :)

    Unfortunately i am going very busy with my work so i didn't find time to make this more better.

    At my end there is INTRO part at home page is left and bottom Navigation Part, Form Sending Functionality, Portfolio Section, Content of all of the website. I will add more categories also in this.

    Thanks again for review.

    Regards,
    M. Amir
     
    amirsalmani, Oct 23, 2009 IP
  9. koba

    koba Peon

    Messages:
    88
    Likes Received:
    2
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    #9
    Personally I do not see any reason why this site built in flash: everything that I see could be done with ajax and html. Also I always wonder how people do SEO for flash based websites?
     
    koba, Oct 24, 2009 IP
  10. amirsalmani

    amirsalmani Active Member

    Messages:
    292
    Likes Received:
    2
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    53
    #10
    Hi Koba,

    You are right that this website could built with Ajax/Js/Html etc. But this website is not complete yet. I have some other plannings too to add in this website. As i have wrote at top.

    Btw i have book the domain name brimtechnologies.com, so my this flash based website will live at this domain and at brim.in i will use the Static HTML website so we can do the SEO also of it.

    Thanks for the feedback.

    Regards,
    M. Amir
     
    amirsalmani, Oct 24, 2009 IP
  11. ptcindonesia

    ptcindonesia Peon

    Messages:
    9
    Likes Received:
    0
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    #11
    Nice and cool design..
    It is good for me..:):)

    But If I can design it, I prefer to use black rather than blue.
    Just like the first page before I hit Enter..

    I also don't like the box texture on the page. I prefer to remove the texture, and leave it blank..:)

    Just my personal sense :)
     
    ptcindonesia, Oct 24, 2009 IP
  12. addisonwhite

    addisonwhite Peon

    Messages:
    20
    Likes Received:
    0
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    #12
    Hey the website loading time is longer then expected..
    but surely interface of the website is quite good. Do some coding work for enhancing loading time of your web.
     
    addisonwhite, Oct 24, 2009 IP
  13. cimmer481

    cimmer481 Guest

    Messages:
    46
    Likes Received:
    0
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    #13
    Definitely looks pretty cool, I like the way the little world looks, that's pretty neat. Maybe one day I'll try and build a flash site like this.
     
    cimmer481, Oct 24, 2009 IP
  14. cyclexmarketing

    cyclexmarketing Guest

    Messages:
    58
    Likes Received:
    1
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    #14
    Everything looks and feels good. However, I'm not a big fan of background music in websites.
     
    cyclexmarketing, Oct 24, 2009 IP
  15. anfrox

    anfrox Peon

    Messages:
    41
    Likes Received:
    0
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    #15
    nice one, although i would place menu block higher because i spent some time looking for it..
     
    anfrox, Oct 25, 2009 IP
  16. mikebpo

    mikebpo Active Member

    Messages:
    237
    Likes Received:
    0
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    51
    #16
    veru interestive idea keep the good work up.
     
    mikebpo, Oct 25, 2009 IP
  17. flash99

    flash99 Peon

    Messages:
    46
    Likes Received:
    1
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    #17
    I can't open your site :(
     
    flash99, Oct 25, 2009 IP
  18. Five

    Five Peon

    Messages:
    30
    Likes Received:
    1
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    #18
    your site load to long...

    is it because you using flash ?
     
    Five, Oct 25, 2009 IP
  19. higreg7

    higreg7 Peon

    Messages:
    469
    Likes Received:
    3
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    #19
    No, it's because you need to get a better connection speed, it loads instantly here :)
     
    higreg7, Oct 26, 2009 IP
  20. neelanjan

    neelanjan Peon

    Messages:
    44
    Likes Received:
    0
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    #20
    overall good..best of luck!!
     
    neelanjan, Oct 26, 2009 IP