Review my flash animation?

Discussion in 'Graphics & Multimedia' started by JustCause, Jun 26, 2010.

  1. #1
    Ive been working for a while now on flash animations and lip syncing, so i decided to come up with a mini web series called "Talking Polatics".

    I was wondering if you guys could let me know what you think and/or provide some feedback to hopefully help me improve for my next video.

    Video link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UcVkhrkV8Tg

    Basically any constructive feedback would be greatly appreciated!
     
    JustCause, Jun 26, 2010 IP
  2. hypesol

    hypesol Member

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    #2
    nice try but you can do make it more better. i am also flash animator i think you are new in flash animations?
     
    hypesol, Jun 26, 2010 IP
  3. ITDStars

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    #3
    Nice Trying
     
    ITDStars, Jun 26, 2010 IP
  4. ViolentAJ

    ViolentAJ Well-Known Member

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    #4
    Not bad. I think that bin Laden's dead though.

    Anyway, this is a decent try. It's better than what I can do (I gave up on animation a while ago myself and I focus on games). It looks like something that I'd see on Newgrounds maybe 6 years ago.
     
    ViolentAJ, Jun 26, 2010 IP
  5. JustCause

    JustCause Guest

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    Yeah im relatively new to flash and tbh just trying to get used to the lip syncing, then once ive mastered that i want to move onto full animations, then improve the art lol
     
    JustCause, Jun 27, 2010 IP
  6. Profitmarketer

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    #6
    Thats cool, I think your bin Laden is darker that his real skin colour
     
    Profitmarketer, Jun 28, 2010 IP
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    marypainter Active Member

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    #7
    Its pretty basic. Keep on working , practicing .
     
    marypainter, Jun 30, 2010 IP
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    rhino_wylie, Jun 30, 2010 IP
  9. mrsun613

    mrsun613 Peon

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    #9
    eh I dunno it's not that great sorry
     
    mrsun613, Jun 30, 2010 IP
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    o3harris Active Member

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    #10
    Good try. Can improve more by animating the faces
     
    o3harris, Jul 4, 2010 IP
  11. clbyodo

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    #11
    Your try is nice but you can make this more better.
     
    clbyodo, Jul 5, 2010 IP
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    hemantwebmaster Member

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    #12
    It is very nice
     
    hemantwebmaster, Jul 5, 2010 IP
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    KomodoArts Greenhorn

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    #13
    its nice ... but some more detailing can be added !
     
    KomodoArts, Jul 5, 2010 IP
  14. flashire

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    #14
    You have to do that bin ladin more looking alive, so shaking head or something
     
    flashire, Jul 10, 2010 IP
  15. Robert Kennedy

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    #15
    Kinda funny but basic
     
    Robert Kennedy, Jul 16, 2010 IP
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    #16
    Not bad, keep trying, will improve!
     
    Zee1652, Jul 19, 2010 IP
  17. aprillove83

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    #17
    Well, that is very nice and make it more better. Well done.
     
    aprillove83, Jul 31, 2010 IP
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    #18
    Nice try. :)
     
    EYRONNN, Aug 4, 2010 IP
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    #19
    Not soo bad its acceptable
     
    naser224u, Aug 5, 2010 IP
  20. fertigo

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    #20
    nice :D. Good Job
     
    fertigo, Aug 6, 2010 IP