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Discussion in 'Websites' started by lifeplayer, Nov 11, 2008.

  1. justinlorder

    justinlorder Peon

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    #21
    The height and width ratio is weird , it looks like a site with little content .
    SEMrush
     
    justinlorder, Nov 15, 2008 IP
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  2. davcheong

    davcheong Well-Known Member

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    #22
    I've pm you, check pm. Willing to help. :)
     
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  3. lifeplayer

    lifeplayer Notable Member Premium Member

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    #23
    Any suggestion???
    Frankly speaking, the content is not much since i still adding content


    Thank again since you helps me a lot
     
    lifeplayer, Nov 15, 2008 IP
  4. ndrstr

    ndrstr Banned

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    #24
    I agree that the header should be changed. Very difficult to read. But it's not bad for the fist time. The content is also O.K. And I like the choice of colors. Good luck!
     
    ndrstr, Nov 15, 2008 IP
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    #25
    I like the layout, but the different colors don't really go with each other, causing your site to look somewhat weird.
     
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  6. lifeplayer

    lifeplayer Notable Member Premium Member

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    #26
    Thanks for the input. different people like different colour.
    I might change the colour when i find i boring with the recent colour one day.
     
    lifeplayer, Nov 15, 2008 IP
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    jotsingh.com Peon

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    #27
    Make a neat header. It is all jumbled . otherwise neat design
     
    jotsingh.com, Nov 15, 2008 IP
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    #28
    Not too bad. I would have gone with a red/yellow theme.
     
    squadron, Nov 15, 2008 IP
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    #29
    In English we read left to right first. Psychologically it is a good point to advertising. And also I suggest you to have the categories in left site. I personally tested this techniques in my sites and got good results. Especially it works with Adsense. You can add a Adsense link unit right after the category.

    There are too much of padding between the category and the content. In content area texts are too closer to the image. you can give margin for the image to correct it.

    Add some keywords like Free bags, Free photos in the title tag. This will help you to get a good search result.

    As everybody said you should have nice header to attract the users.
    Since this is a freebie site you can use some fancy icons and cliparts to indicate the categories.

    looking forward your rep.
     
    aslamnajeem, Nov 16, 2008 IP
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  10. lifeplayer

    lifeplayer Notable Member Premium Member

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    #30
    You are really give a good suggestion nd provide opportunity for me to improve. Thank you very much
    Rep added
     
    lifeplayer, Nov 17, 2008 IP
  11. gunsnroses

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    #31
    it is a good site..but the same typical ones we also see..people r more fed up of these kind of concept..can u use bit diff with more bright and attractive colors...and little bit change in ur wordings also..but the look is ver perfect and i like it..i just gave u additional tips coz iam a animator and a graphic designer..a simple kind of smileys and animative cartoons wud make it more attractive..it is all upto u...
     
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    gunsnroses Peon

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    #32
    reading all 2 ur posts i think i gave u a perfect solution...
     
    gunsnroses, Nov 17, 2008 IP
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    #33
    Simple site, you should improve its look. Use google image ads on right site. Submit it to Free Directory for promotion.
     
    ish221100, Nov 17, 2008 IP
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    gecekusu Peon

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    #34
    very simple..anyway good luck
     
    gecekusu, Nov 17, 2008 IP
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    #35
    True. Not good in designing, it mights take me some time to study on it before i can improve. Thanks for the input
    rep added
     
    lifeplayer, Nov 18, 2008 IP
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    #36
    Make the text in the header image clearer (the border should be black), make more whitespace around the table edges in your actual freebie blocks.
     
    skyhr, Nov 18, 2008 IP
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    #37
    Good site,looks simple feels simple,this is a great site,when you say it your first,
    a first site is always special,Best of Luck with FreebiesPark!!:)
     
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    lifeplayer Notable Member Premium Member

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    #38
    Thank you for the suggestion and wish you can see the improvement on my website.
    Rep Added
     
    lifeplayer, Nov 20, 2008 IP
  19. amiman

    amiman Well-Known Member

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    #39
    Nice simple layout.
    No matter whats said a good attempt for a first try. I wish my first site was as good a layout as that. But be prepared for years of it not being good enough and learning something new everyday to make it better.

    GOOD LUCK
     
    amiman, Nov 20, 2008 IP
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    xcrox Banned

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    #40
    The Website Is Great In Consideration Thats Its Your 1st :)
     
    xcrox, Nov 20, 2008 IP