Review my First Website

I'm finally start my fisrt website - www.freebiespark.com
which is talk about freebie. I need review and advice on the website designing, arranging and content.

Reputation will be added if good suggestion provided.

Thanks & regards

 

hello,
Very simple. as u say this is ur first sebsite, yes for the first time its ok but when u enter in the global field of web u should think professionaly. its menas not that its not good design. i notes the following: too much space both of the side # Banner need more development # Try to use a logo # Add any graphic work inside.

Thank u

 

The site would look better if it had a nicer theme, and it's very
difficult to read the "Away" in the header of the site.

 

You should make header with the logo which represents the sites aim you can download free css template for that

 

Great input. I'm actually still inputing the content.
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True. I already hire someone to design the banner so that the "Away" will able to show up.
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Already order some logo but not yet receive. Will change the header once i get the satisfied banner.
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I would definately change the header. If using wordpress it looks like? change your header to a graphic and take out the text that is there for above the picture.

Then install the All IN ONE SEO pack for wordpress to re-add your tags for your pages like your text you replaced there.


Also links on far right, might want to change from the blue color unless you were trying to make it as your google ads colors.? then change it to green or something, looks more inviting then the blue color, you can edit these colors and make a template in your adsense account and save a template for your site.

 

I just did a quick review and here's my immediate impressions when I took glimpse of your site.
- Ads are consuming too much space.
- More Content.
- You need a better header.
- Layout is good.

All of these are based IMO. Good luck!

 

I just did a quick review and here's my immediate impressions when I took glimpse of your site.
- Ads are consuming too much space.
- More Content.
- You need a better header.
- Layout is good.

All of these are based IMO.

 

Thanks man for rep

 

Review:

Too many adds imo. Take up far too much of the screen

Try and split the different offers up abit, it's hard to take a look at them without concentrating.

Make the website full screen (without the grey borders at either side) - this will give you more space to display the offers.

Put the middle section ads under the offers imo (First impression matters. My impression was ads).

Change the banner as mentioned above.

 

Hi lifeplayer
you can offer a newsletter to your visitors to tell them about new freebies or new products

 

I like the colors but it looks like an out-of-the-box viagra site. I would suggest modifying the default template

 

nice idea you should also have a section put up for black friday deals which will be highly searched these next couple of weeks.
also the site loads fast but needs a more professional look, not that its bad at all but it needs to be cleaner...if that makes sense.

 

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Tell me i would create a logo for u at low cost. it needs Graphics development to attract people!

 

All the suggestion is really helps me to improve my website.
Rup added and thank you for the help

 

Should you consider the arrangement on homepage,

INTRODUCTIONs
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ad.s link here
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| ads | Contents |
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| Contents | Ads |
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| Contents | Contents |
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PS : Whats with the promotion comment post #14 here? If you know, Isn't it rude to simply jack in like this? If you not sure, you shouldn't post your promotion here, you should somewhere here where you can sell your site there. Here is lifeplayer asking for review not asking for new website.

 

I like the look of the site. You might consider adding an autoresponder optin box so you can collect email addresses and follow up with maybe a freebies newsletter.

 

I think the same, when i start set up this website, i was thinking to use the placement as you suggested. The problem is i'm not good in website making, and i fail to place the ads inside the box....lol
That's why i make it as you see.
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Another great suggestion, i'm doing this actually. However, the only autoresponder will send all the freebie to the requester. The problem is i would like to find those autoresponder able to send the email according to country since not all the freebies is available for international member
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Great idea