Review My "First Step to Link Building" Please

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    bookworm-seo, Dec 22, 2006 IP
  2. Nima

    Nima Well-Known Member

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    Honestly,

    Use more spaces between your paragraphs to make your article more user friendly. It's all crammed into each other.

    But I liked the article.
    Thanks
     
    Nima, Dec 23, 2006 IP
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    bookworm-seo Peon

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    Thanks a lot Nima, much appreciated. Any other folks who could review the post?
     
    bookworm-seo, Dec 24, 2006 IP
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    candid_kris Banned

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    I do agree with Nima in regards to the spaces/breaks of your article...and i think the font size of your synopsis before the main article...IMO it is so big for the font size of the main article...
     
    candid_kris, Dec 26, 2006 IP
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    Appreciate it Kris. I'll definitely make more of an effort to get it better spaced and more legible. Any thoughts on the article itself? Good advice? Bad? ANything missing?
     
    bookworm-seo, Dec 30, 2006 IP