I just finished it, and will work on it more, please tell me what you guys think and what should be changed? http://freemagic.freehostia.com/ (Yes link will be changed too lol)
Banner I didn't get this at first. You don't want to make your visitor think too much - I would make the graphic much more blatent in terms of what you're promoting. Or even remove it altogether. Headline(s) More benefits (sizzle) needed I think. Perhaps combine the headline & subheads - "Become the talk of a party with my amazing floating cigarette trick." "Delight your friends by reading their minds!" "Make friends and become the center of attention with my simple yet amazing tricks that even your granny could learn" (Okay, so I'm not a copywriter but you get the idea...) Magic Floating Cigarette Video LOL - Ok, this one had me interested! Not quite enough to sign up but almost (and I'm not even that interested in magic!) Testimonial Nice. Could use a few more. Bullet Points I think these would be better before the testimonial. Again, more sizzle needed. Area 51 Teaser Video Would be nice if there was a screenshot (pic) of this, just to get an idea of what it actually is. Miscellaneous "YES please sign me up for the Free 3 day" may be better as "YES, I want the Free 3 day" "Simply fill out the form below" may be better in a smaller font than the subheading and on a new line. Possibly also change it to include a benefit - "Simply fill out the form below and you'll be amazing your friends in just 3 short days..." Overall Nice. Damn, I want to know how you do that floating cigarette trick. hehe.
Great man thanks for the advice! I really wish I would have started or learn more about squeeze pages and building a list years and years ago! I will make changes with your advice! I love your headline idea!
Here are some free squeeze optin page graphics for you to download: www.myfreesqueezepagetemplates.com They might help you call peoples attention. Good Luck, Jerry