review my first blog

Discussion in 'Websites' started by buruumcmtop, Nov 11, 2010.

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    well my first website was kehosts.com and now this is my first blog www.makingdecentmoney.com know the theme is not so good..but articles are all unique and need some review..there are alot of blogs on money online but my target is local kenyan people..and i believe i can get alot of traffic
     
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    buruumcmtop, Nov 11, 2010 IP
  2. giorgioarmani

    giorgioarmani Well-Known Member

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    I suggest you edit the link in your post as it isn't working.

    Regarding your blog:

    - How about adding some image?
    - How about adding a graphical header? logo?
    - How about adding some more things to your right sidebar?
     
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  3. loopy22

    loopy22 Peon

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    first of all make money online niche is very crowded it will be really hard for you to rank for good keywords,secondly your content is not educative,entertaining or enlightining therefore you may
    want to create or get good content created first
     
    loopy22, Nov 11, 2010 IP
  4. theurbantwist

    theurbantwist Well-Known Member

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    I agree! Your site looks pretty boring. What would your site offer to someone? And obviously since the most of us are webmasters here, it's pretty obvious that your site is powered by WP Robot and you're just trying to make money through adsense but try to be a little discreet with it. There's nothing worse than a site that SCREAMS OUT that its only goal is to make money instead of trying to educate or inform people on how they CAN make money as your site proclaims. Your site definitely needs a touch up and a major revamp. Its only use is for you to hopefully get some clicks and make some money for you.
     
    theurbantwist, Nov 11, 2010 IP