Review my DREAM WEBSITE!!

Discussion in 'Websites' started by oblivion19, Sep 7, 2008.

  1. #1
    Hey there,

    I started my site http://www.dentalhealthsite.com just yesterday....

    would really appreciate some feedback on the

    • Design
    • Layout
    • SEO
    etc etc

    There are some obvious bugs which need to be fixed as well..
     
    oblivion19, Sep 7, 2008 IP
  2. glendowney

    glendowney Notable Member

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    #2
    I like the design and layout, but maybe think about changing the orange link colors to something a bit more easier on the eye.

    I'd also add a new title to your website instead of just 'Home'.

    Looking good so far though.
     
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  3. realmahbub

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    not bad, but i dont like the background color. can u choose anyother color?

    thanks
     
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    Rivmedia Notable Member

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    #4
    Change the Homepage title to something that relates to the site instead of "home" it will help you more in seo
     
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    callmeminty Active Member

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    #5
    Liked the content.

    Didn't like the background..

    there is room for improvement.
     
    callmeminty, Sep 7, 2008 IP
  6. Beduz

    Beduz Peon

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    #6
    your website look so cool. but there something look not so professional, subscribe form. change it if you can, so that visitors more confident to subscribe.

    just my opinion :)
     
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    #7
    I really like how you attempt to make dental health fun with your text. But the page look, logo and top banner are, IMHO, dull and business-like. I'd consider creating a more fun and engaging page look that better fits your great content.
     
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    #8
    Nice layout. Don't like header and backgound. And yeah, you should make subscribe form better and more attractive.
     
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    #9
    I like the overall layout and design but I do not like the background.
     
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    #10
    I like it so far but rich your content and add some photos
     
    beau85, Sep 8, 2008 IP
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    #11
    It looks pretty good. I like the background, it looks unique. I didn't go through all the links to test if they do work ;).

    I would change : "We Won’t spam ya.".... I don't know what, but it didn't go down well with me.

    GOOD LUCK
     
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  12. Uzi Levitovitch

    Uzi Levitovitch Active Member

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    I think you should change your site background...then you should clean the HTML code so your site can pass w3c validation...then center your menu on vertical, add some spacing to the images in the content part...and lastly I think you will be needed some space for partner links or banners
     
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    #13
    as has been said the background does not work. Go for a plain colour (or white). The top logo also screams like its a dentist surgery or something. You need a fun graphic and logo - a cartoon or similar, to make the site seem less serious and more social.
     
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  14. papayamilkshake

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    #14
    You might want to increase the size of the logo to make full use of the space? It looks rather empty with the spaces. The colors are striking for the links, it hurts the eyes and is recommended to go for a lighter tone. :)
     
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    #15
    Your theme is good. You have done some work on design but should re consider the color combination of your site. In total site look is dull so use some bright color I consider.

    from Seo point of view you are not using any title and keyword. Description is given but it is not good. You should research for dental related key words and use them. For wordpress you get lot of plug in like All-in-one Seo pack, Seo title tag. You are already using post teaser or smiler plugin.

    You site have some empty space you can fill those space with some information or use some thing like google adds they will also help you to earn some money.
     
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    #16
    you need to look at sites you like on the web, take time out before starting a site to research good design and bad.
     
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    #17
    Website theme is good. Color matching is also good. Very simple design.
    Nothing to complain.
     
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    #18
    I like the content it is informative and also the lay-out. add more content please.
     
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    #19
    Content is Good but as with the others I dont like the background:)
     
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    #20
    i'm not happy with the overall lay-out either
     
    alex_ht, Sep 14, 2008 IP