Hi, I am selling a script on DP but i am not sure of the sales pitch as i often sell items but no matter how good the item or service i seem to lack interest. I am thinking maybe my sales pitches areno good so i hope someone can review for me and tel me if you think the sales pitch is any good and what parts of it need changing. Thread URL: http://forums.digitalpoint.com/showthread.php?t=548832 Thank you for your reviews appreciate it and hopefully i can get some good input to work on.
The biggest problem I see is your English. If you're trying to sell something, have a native English speaker review before posting. For example: "Welcome to my sale selling my newly developed script this is an Answers Search Engine Script that pulls results from yahoo API to display questions and answers on your own site. This gives you a content rich site without the hassle of having to create hundreds upon hundreds of pages by hand." would be much better as: "The Answers Search Engine Script pulls results from the Yahoo API to display questions and answers on your own site. This newly developed script provides you with a content rich site without the hassle of having to create hundreds upon hundreds of pages by hand." That said, I'm not sure there is as much of a demand for auto-generated website content as there was a year or so ago. I may be wrong, but since Google is now penalizing these sites I think they have lost a bit of favor.