It is a decent site. I like the design but be aware it took a while to load the image for the header/sidebar on my slow connection. I'd also say that you should tone down all the Digg/Facebook etc icons. I don't know if they are really necessary for your site, much more suitable towards blogs. Also, for a writing service you should spell check your site (manually). Example: On the 2nd sentance on your homepage you write: "Without sounding to cliché our website does exactly what it says". Instead of "to" it should be "too". You can't afford not to check this as a writing service,
It's a nice design, though I agree with mark_w's feedback. The background does take a long time to load and all the social bookmarking icons are excessive and tacky.
Looks nice. One thing from usability point of view. It could be confusing what is clickable in the top banner. The "Photo" and "Gallery" things look like they lead to more content but they don't. Also the banner looks a bit washed out, which in turn makes it look a bit cheap.
I really did like your design. Your website was very informative, yet not overpowering. Very easy to navigate. If I would of done the website, I would of kept all the links to the website to one side and not try to put the links for home, about, and contact just above services and split them up with another slip of paper bringing the services down a little, leaving the little mobile phone alone. Having said all that, I really do wish you every success.
It's a WP, isn't it? Don't forget to credit the real author. Anyhow, it's a cute design aimed at kids or early teens -- is that your target audience? Didn't think so!
Looks nice overall, however, as said before...does it fit your target market? Also, I would contain your social media bookmarks a bit better. If this is a WP site, there are good plugins that enable you to have the bookmarking options without the clutter- look at AddToAny: Share/Bookmark/Email Button.
Theme of your site is really attractive I think its a very cool work so no need to change anything now