Review My Coming Soon Page

Discussion in 'Design' started by vectors, May 13, 2013.

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    Check my coming-soon page I design! Using adobe Illustrator. It took almost 40 minutes to draw this. Suggestion are welcome.Oh just ignore the spelling ;) ​
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  2. Airknight

    Airknight Active Member

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    Interesting idea but it's a bit dull, especially when we are talking about graphic ressources. I'm expecting bright and vivid colors.

    Your fonts could be better too
     
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    johnmdotme Greenhorn

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    Exactly what he said. I would work on your typography and colors.

    Also never use such shadows that are that dark or with that much distance. It gives it a very unprofessional feel. For typography, Id suggest bookmarking a lot of dribbble inspiration and search for UI and UX design.
     
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    vectors Well-Known Member

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    Thank You so much for reply! sir... I should consider you point specially the dull! I agree
     
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    vectors Well-Known Member

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    Thank You sir! I Appreciate you have pointed out the mistakes I have done! Just a Beginner designer still working on my fonts selection and work! :)
     
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