REVIEW MY CARTOON DESIGN

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  1. #1
    Please Give me review from my cartoon foto
     

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  2. Jmor

    Jmor Member

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    #2
    it looks legit! in my perspective, over all it great... i think to make it better is try to make it a little darker, and zoom it out a little bit. good job though!
     
    Jmor, Feb 3, 2015 IP
  3. irfansyah

    irfansyah Well-Known Member

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    i still stadied became a designer.. everyday i learned designed pics style person...

    thanks for your feedback and suggest..
     
    irfansyah, Feb 3, 2015 IP
  4. Jmor

    Jmor Member

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    really?! that's way better for a beginner like you! keep it up!
     
    Jmor, Feb 3, 2015 IP
  5. sarahk

    sarahk iTamer Staff

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    #5
    Is it hand drawn or a converted photo?
     
    sarahk, Feb 3, 2015 IP
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    anence Peon

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    #6
    I agree with Jmor. Little darker will be better.
     
    anence, Feb 3, 2015 IP
  7. irfansyah

    irfansyah Well-Known Member

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    #7
    i drawn that from a photo. i used photoshop.
     
    irfansyah, Feb 3, 2015 IP
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    departurearea Peon

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    #8
    I like it. The eyes are nice.
     
    departurearea, Feb 4, 2015 IP
  9. irfansyah

    irfansyah Well-Known Member

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    Please Give me review from my cartoon foto..


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    Hello
     
    irfansyah, Feb 6, 2015 IP
  10. sarahk

    sarahk iTamer Staff

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    #10
    You have nice bone structure but your cartoon loses that detail - I'd add it back in to give your face some character
     
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    irfansyah Well-Known Member

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    angelica c Greenhorn

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    #12
    Take away the background and the "red dream"!
    The background shall be... just the background! In behind. In this moment, it is the main attraction...! Oups!
     
    angelica c, Feb 28, 2015 IP
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    SocialSignals Well-Known Member

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    #13
    The face lacks any shade whatsoever. It makes the whole thing look flat. Also, it's based in a photo. Which is extremely noticable to me.I would suggest you try drawing it freehand.
    And the background should lack all details. It need to be a single colour and a simple one at that.
     
    SocialSignals, May 26, 2015 IP