Review my brother's hosting website please

Hello.

My elder brother's hosting website is being launched tomorrow. He asked me to get reviews from DP members about that site.

Please comment on this site. http://mobilehosters.com Thanks.

 

no one will sign up at your hosting

1. site design looks scammy
2. there are lot better hosts in india

 

I do not like the red border around the text used in the Introductory
Offer banner you should remove that effect, and "Pay for an year..."
is grammatically incorrect it should be Pay for a year. The majority
of the first page consists of graphics for seo purposes it would be
better if you removed some of the graphics and replaced it with
text.

 

more than 1300 sites are hosted on the server. most probably you are having a reseller account... any way good luck. but i think no one will sign up

 

make it look more modern - it looks un trustworthy -

 

exactly what i meant

 

The 'pay for an year' thing was discussed for a long time and finally placed as 'an' itself as the following word starts with a 'e' sound. I suppose I read somewhere that if the following word starts even with a sound like 'a', 'e', 'i', 'o', 'u', then 'an' should come instead of 'a' though the first letter is not a vowel.

And thanks for the review both of you. Will consider them all.

 

What does the site make you feel scammy? The offer is really provided. Introductory offer. Not for all. For a limited account. How can I overcome the scammy look?

 

get a professional website design to make people convince.

Look at my site: http://www.physicshelp4u.com - it has clean design.

 

Thanks Welling and everyone. I'll look to what can be done for this.

 

Hi, I also agree with this, site is spammy and also have not any professional look. So, change the design, which should like professional hosting design.

 

Neither me, nor my brother are good at designing. And we got this template with all pages readymade. There were many other templates too, which was really professional. But we weren't able to edit them and they had only the home page. I had no idea how to make other pages competible with that home page.

 

I can do it for you and provide you updates of your site when needed. pm me if you are interested. I can design a pro site with logo and professional graphics.

 

You mean you can edit those templates or you can create a new website? And how much does you charge for it?

 

i can do both

 

yep - looks fresh and trusting

 

WOW... that's soo ugly... I'm sorry but it looks like a first attempt of a 12 year old kid... try hiring a professional or if you already did/thought you did that you just threw your money down the toilet

 

This banner kind of looks bad, and it has a grammar error, using "an year"

 

Your sites not have a professional look.