Hello everyone! I'm currently in the process of writing my first book. I recently published the first five chapters that I have written online into my blog. All of my writing is copy-righted, and most of my writing has been published under my maiden name. The name of my book: Starr Sinclair: Birth Right: The Beginning Synopsis: Starr Sinclair, a fifteen year old girl, watches her father get murdered right in front of her eyes. She goes to live with her aunt just a few days prior to her sixteenth birthday. As the story unravels, Starr comes into super human powers. She will learn to control her powers and she will use them to fight off the ultimate evil. What I would like reviewed: The story itself. I know that their are some grammar and punctuation errors. The book is a work in progress. Mainly I would just like some honest feed back on the story itself, where it's going, etc. To View my story, you will have to go to my blog http://tegdesigns.com/teg/ You will find it under Creative Writing > Books > Starr Sinclair Book 1. Please start at chapter 1. Thanks for your time, Teg