review my blog

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by sb1234, Jun 12, 2008.

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    sb1234, Jun 12, 2008 IP
  2. jhon99

    jhon99 Banned

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    #2
    is it affiliate blog ?
     
    jhon99, Jun 12, 2008 IP
  3. kingofsanda

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    #3
    The blog looks generic, you should get a unique template,
    and your ad placement could be better.
     
    kingofsanda, Jun 12, 2008 IP
  4. HotByte

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    #4
    sorry 2 things i dont like

    first thing you see is just ads - i usually leave a site if i see this

    and also i dont tend to read make money online blogs done on free sites like blogspot
    if they make so much money at least they can pay for a domain name and
    hosting for their site

    sorry just my opinion
     
    HotByte, Jun 12, 2008 IP
  5. 6jin-Jing

    6jin-Jing Active Member

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    I thought it isn't allowed to write text to make people click on your ads?
     
    6jin-Jing, Jun 12, 2008 IP
  6. wpthemedeveloper

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    #6
    you can use wordpress for your blog instead of bloger, in wp you will get more functionality than blogger.any how site looks good content :)
     
    wpthemedeveloper, Jun 13, 2008 IP
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    #7
    The subtitle is a little too long.

    Also for the first couple articles, the white space in the middle was a little jarring. it did get better in later articles though.
     
    johnlocke01, Jun 13, 2008 IP
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    #8
    Your subtitle needs a little cleaning up. There's punctuation and cap errors that started to make me wonder.

    You have it: Learn on how you can earn money from the net, we help you and we discussed it here. join us and be a part of the community

    You could fix it like this: Learn how you can earn money from the net. We help you by discussing everything here. Join us and be a part of the community.

    Also, I like your PepperJam ads up top. Very well placed. Made me stop and read.

    I thought your information would be helpful to your target audience. The first 2 or 3 informational posts were good. But toward the end, you had the keyword stuffing going on, and I wondered if you were sincere about really trying to build and help a community, or just get ad clicks.
     
    viqifrench, Jun 14, 2008 IP
  9. pepperjam

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    #9
    The pepperjamADS do in fact look great - I agree they are well placed. I'd probably target them a bit better, but you know your sudience better than me! :)

    Kris
     
    pepperjam, Jun 14, 2008 IP