The blog is a bit plain, try incorporating more photographs into your content area. For your adsense ad, it would look better with black next as opposed to blue.
There sure are a lot of ads... sometimes its ok to go with a bunch of adsense, but for some reason the mix of adsense and "hookup site banners" seems overwhelming... no offense...
Well, i wouldn't take drastic action off of any of my reviews, haha... I would wait a while, see how the blog does, and if you decide you're not getting enough traffic, then lighten up on the ads to try and get more repeat visitors...