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Discussion in 'Reviews' started by WebDeveloperSahil, Dec 11, 2013.

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    WebDeveloperSahil, Dec 11, 2013 IP
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  2. wizzyweb

    wizzyweb Greenhorn

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    Hello, in my humble opinion, article is very good, but it needs something to make it more shareable, something that will draw attention.
    Try to change the title and subtitles, something like "Don't start with blogging until you read this!" or "5 must have qualities for bloggers"
    or something like that.
    You can also add more text, at least 1000 words.

    Keep up the good work!
     
    wizzyweb, Dec 12, 2013 IP
  3. mollie.fr

    mollie.fr Active Member

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    Hi wizzyweb (Sahil),

    I read your blog and i really liked it. Things i noticed:

    1.Nice, simple and informative content.
    2.Nice colors, background and font used.
    3.Animation is making your blog attractive.

    Just try to highlight keyword or important points on contents else everything is fine. Also Try to increase your facebook page like.

    Good Luck ! :):)
     
    mollie.fr, Dec 12, 2013 IP
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    alinasandor Well-Known Member

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    There are a lot of grammar errors in your article that make it hard to read.
     
    alinasandor, Dec 16, 2013 IP
  5. Ty Snowden

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    There are some good points. I like the headings, followed by each elaboration.
    Overall, it is not very well written or at least the content is just mediocre I will say.

    There are some points that you can take note and improve.
    1) Try to give a more professional tone. Writing is different from speaking. Also avoid using 'Yeah' or '&' in writing.
    2) Improve on your length of the article so that to provide more value to the reader.
    3) Always proofread before publishing. Best way to eliminate grammar errors. ;)
     
    Ty Snowden, Dec 20, 2013 IP
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    funmom91 Well-Known Member

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    1. The title needs to be more attention grabbing.

    2. The article needs to be edited/proofread

    3. Nice graphics by the way

    4. You could eliminate some of the fluff in it.
     
    funmom91, Dec 20, 2013 IP
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    wco Well-Known Member

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    Hello Sahil, and thank you for sharing your article with us!

    I found your article to be interesting, and unique in it's nature in terms of the graphics, and color-schemes.
    With that being said, I'd strongly suggest you not only add additional content, but perhaps also continue on the topic with things like earning potential, how long it takes to be 'successful' in blogging to generate an income, or even additional guidelines such as mentioned above, perhaps a list of "must-knows" for prospective bloggers reading your website.

    In terms of the typos and some of the formatting on the site.. would you like my help with this? Feel free to drop me a PM via my inbox, and I'd be happy to go over it with you this weekend via Skype, free of charge, but not only to fix it for you--but actually also explain why the formatting or grammar errors I chose needed to be fixed, so you know/understand and are more proficient in the future as you continue to add content to your blog. All the best. William
     
    wco, Jan 17, 2014 IP
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    Article is interesting, Unique with minor punctuation errors but overall i found it qualitative.
     
    Brand Builder, Feb 12, 2014 IP
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    The article is no more on the respected site, Please check.
     
    No1 BrandMaker, Feb 28, 2014 IP
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    Webfrontier Biz Active Member

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    Same here. I also don't see the content of the blog.
     
    Webfrontier Biz, Mar 11, 2014 IP
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    Waseem Simi Banned

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    You need to use bullets, proper headlines, paragraphs, highly searched keywords, simple flow of article for understanding.
     
    Waseem Simi, Mar 18, 2014 IP
  12. M.Mani

    M.Mani Banned

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    i checked your link, i think you removed article :)
     
    M.Mani, Mar 31, 2014 IP