Review my article please

Can you please review my article? All comments and feedback is appreciated.
Here is my article: Getting started with Blogging

 

Hello, in my humble opinion, article is very good, but it needs something to make it more shareable, something that will draw attention.
Try to change the title and subtitles, something like "Don't start with blogging until you read this!" or "5 must have qualities for bloggers"
or something like that.
You can also add more text, at least 1000 words.

Keep up the good work!

 

Hi wizzyweb (Sahil),

I read your blog and i really liked it. Things i noticed:

1.Nice, simple and informative content.
2.Nice colors, background and font used.
3.Animation is making your blog attractive.

Just try to highlight keyword or important points on contents else everything is fine. Also Try to increase your facebook page like.

Good Luck !

 

There are a lot of grammar errors in your article that make it hard to read.

 

There are some good points. I like the headings, followed by each elaboration.
Overall, it is not very well written or at least the content is just mediocre I will say.

There are some points that you can take note and improve.
1) Try to give a more professional tone. Writing is different from speaking. Also avoid using 'Yeah' or '&' in writing.
2) Improve on your length of the article so that to provide more value to the reader.
3) Always proofread before publishing. Best way to eliminate grammar errors.

 

1. The title needs to be more attention grabbing.

2. The article needs to be edited/proofread

3. Nice graphics by the way

4. You could eliminate some of the fluff in it.

 

Hello Sahil, and thank you for sharing your article with us!

I found your article to be interesting, and unique in it's nature in terms of the graphics, and color-schemes.
With that being said, I'd strongly suggest you not only add additional content, but perhaps also continue on the topic with things like earning potential, how long it takes to be 'successful' in blogging to generate an income, or even additional guidelines such as mentioned above, perhaps a list of "must-knows" for prospective bloggers reading your website.

In terms of the typos and some of the formatting on the site.. would you like my help with this? Feel free to drop me a PM via my inbox, and I'd be happy to go over it with you this weekend via Skype, free of charge, but not only to fix it for you--but actually also explain why the formatting or grammar errors I chose needed to be fixed, so you know/understand and are more proficient in the future as you continue to add content to your blog. All the best. William

 

Article is interesting, Unique with minor punctuation errors but overall i found it qualitative.

 

The article is no more on the respected site, Please check.

 

Same here. I also don't see the content of the blog.

 

You need to use bullets, proper headlines, paragraphs, highly searched keywords, simple flow of article for understanding.

 

i checked your link, i think you removed article