Review my $250 Service and Website Please!

My service site is located at

http://tinyurl.com/yrsquu

I am offering $250 web development.

Let me know your thoughts.

Thanks,
Rage

 

Nice design and good price for a 6 page site if it will look as good as your site.

Could you do something for cheap-football . com ?

Thanls

 

Hello.

I like most of the design of the site. I just find that the background tends to make your site look buldgy at the top and bottom and thin in the center. Layout is awesome.... Very simple navigation... so easy for people to understand... What I like most... is how you simplified your Marketing to one specific area.... Nice Job!

One other thing I tested was XHTML validation which showed 14 errors. Might not be a goal for your site but just thought I'd test it.

Just as a note: I'm using FireFox on PClinuxOS 2007

Lhlalyam

 

Nice looking website, here are my suggestions:
- remove the XHTML error,
- remove tables and use divs if possible
- add more top & bottom padding around the container (I would say 10 to 20px)
- use a smaller image on your home page
...

 

Thanks a lot

Thanks alot, and thanks for suggestions, will defiantly think about it,

Thanks i think the suggestion about adding spacing in top and bottom is cool...

 

but put some testimonials to get credibility and better results..

goodluck

 

Thanks Manisha

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Now validated XHTML

 

Cool looking website I would say. Thumbs up! ..

 

Nice site. Good layout. Easy to navigate.

Nice price for a 6 page site.

Testimonials will help a great deal.

Tina

 

Well everything is done very professionally I liked it - nice job

 

Thanks a lot

Thanks a lot... i asked my clients for testimonials, i will surely publish them

Thank you soo much!

 

Can u also advice me that how to boost up my sales?

 

Hi, Rage. I'm new here, but I'm a dev myself, so I've got a little advice...
I like the site. It looks rather professional. Although I'd be curious to see what it would look like with the background image's colours entirely inverted - maybe it'd help focus on the main content.

I like the "Flat-Fee" approach, but you need to work on your copywriting - for example, the line:

"Our Average time of delivery is 2 to 4 days, however in maximum 7 days."

Could be clarified, and made more positive, thus:

"Our maximum turnaround time is seven days, with an average of between two and four days."

And:

"3: Unlimited Revise Designing untill your satisfaction."

Could be phrased better:

"3: Unlimited Design Revisions - we'll keep going until you're 100% satisfied."

I see there's a whole forum on here for the subject of copy writing, so someone in there should be able to help you out. Or, if you'd prefer to save some money and do it yourself, I'd recommend checking out "Elements of Style" by Strunk & White. It's very short, very concise, and is the single fastest way to improve your writing a hundredfold.

I'd also make your "Learn More" link a little more prominent.

Other than that, it all looks good.

 

Thanks a lot for such a wonderful review....

I think each suggestion of your's needs to be done immediately,

I will do all of the changes you said.

Thanks a lot.... this is the best review i ever got


Reps Added!

 

First all of my positive feedback:

Very professional looking
Nice Logo
Very nice layout

The only thing that I thought REALLY stood out was that HUGE HAND. Wow! I usually like to give my "first thought" to anybody asking for a review and that was it. Wow, that is a big hand. It definitely captured my attention and I don't know if that is what you were looking for.

But overall great work!

 

yes... i think you are right, i am working to replace hand woth somthing more interesting

Thanks a lot

____________________________UPDATE_________________________________

I've changed the Picture (main) and Back-ground too

hope its looking better now http://tinyurl.com/yrsquu