Review my 2 websites

Discussion in 'Placement / Reviews / Examples' started by Cadelaf, Dec 19, 2008.

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    Cadelaf, Dec 19, 2008 IP
  2. Zero

    Zero Peon

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    The sites are looking great, but took too long to load for me.

    http://www.smashgamers.com/ - the moving banners on the right are disturbing,

    But it has a nice color sheme and is well designed. Maybe you should change the color background from white to light blue or something. It also should not be fixed.....


    http://www.cadelaf.com/ - the site does not contain a lot of content. lol

    When i click on the "Go"- button i am getting rideracted to http://www.cadelaf.com/browse.php?u=://Type a website url here&b=20 where is a blank site and it says:

    "Couldn't resolve host 'Type%20a%20website%20url%20here'"

    And there are a lot of html validation errors, which should get fixed.

    More Help 1

    More Help 2

    I hope that helps!

    => Anyway, well done and good luck! ;)
     
    Zero, Dec 19, 2008 IP
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    Good work on the gaming one. I would remove the flashy banners, something more subtle - very annoying. In the end just test and retest.
     
    enote, Dec 19, 2008 IP
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    @Zero

    It's because the second link requires you to type a url in that box, you need to put a value such as http://www.google.com, it is a proxy site.


    @enote I removed the flashy banners, thank you.
     
    Cadelaf, Dec 19, 2008 IP