review ma heroes blog

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    voldermort, Oct 28, 2007 IP
  2. Ponynugget

    Ponynugget Peon

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    Hi He Who Must Not Be Named (sorry, had to :p),

    The blog does need a fair bit of work. Your content is minimal -- with blogs you do want to have entries that are more than a paragraph long. Unfortunately having a sentence won't cut it these days and you'll receive very little natural traffic from the search engines.

    You should also get rid of the text that's overlaying the header.

    All the best,
    Liam
     
    Ponynugget, Oct 28, 2007 IP
  3. Brijesh

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    add some vedios it will enhance
     
    Brijesh, Oct 28, 2007 IP
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    many errors in gramar, beginning in the title HEROS???
     
    lusoricas, Oct 29, 2007 IP
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    Every start is hard.There are kinda enough mistakes,spelling errors and such,so you gotta work a little on it to achieve something with this blog.

    Anyway,Good luck!
     
    AWorker, Oct 29, 2007 IP
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    work hard Aworker is right check mistakes
     
    Brijesh, Oct 29, 2007 IP
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    Check some grammar and typo errors... Nice site!!HEROES rocks!
     
    maui_gem, Oct 29, 2007 IP