Review Landing Page (review style)

Hello,
I've made a review style landing page recently and i well researched it and also tried to implent most of the laws of persuasion.

its located at
http://allowsurfing.info/cam

i would realy appreciate a review at it.

Please, i dont mind bad, hard and good critique =), everything is welcome!

 

The page is not loading here, check it out..

 

hmm, it loads instantly here :S and also at my dads pc,

 

just saw a typo at the bottom of the page "you pay or" I think should be "you pay for"

 

well ur layout is very good...its a simple and neat page....u have very little things to explain which u did...
u r working good
best of luck

 

thanks for the help,

i've corrected the typos, made the chart a little wider and put more comparison point into it, any more tips anyone?

 

seems very load
take long time to open all page

 

loaded fast for me. i like the layout.

 

I think it's much too simple now. You should add more color to the site, for each review criteria you could put the winner in green, for example. Add some graphical "visit" buttons instead of just a normal link, etc.. Add a photo to the site.

The lightboxes are real bad, with the cheesy dropshadow (if you click on a testimonial)

 

hmm, thanks.
Is the idea of the lightbox bad or only its graphical design?
Im planning to add photos of the product right between the header and the price,

A Graphical visit now button might be also a good idea as you suggested, im sure going to try it

 

The link is not loading here in all of my browsers(Opera,ff,IE).Check it out.

 

what browser do you use,
i tested it on ff and ie and it works on those 2

 

Just updated with product images, better lightbox and tested multiple browser at browsershots all seemed to work.

 

Iam using opera(9.64 version) and firefox (3.0.13 version) and in both of them the link is not loading.

 

layout is very good loads ok