Indeed, it's also a bit too busy for me. Try to clean it up a bit, make it more simple and therefore attract more attention to where YOU want it to be. Good luck!
its good .... iam reviewing so i suggesion if you make the words with strong colours and every thing after words
What game is this? I guess if you could bend the text and dont overlay the dragon(it's a dragon for me) and put some whiskers on it than the tail of #2. It might be alright.