I know what you're thinking. It's another Make money blog. I know. I hate MMO blogs too. But i set mine up to really try to help people make money online. I wanted feedback of the site, design and content. Thanks. http://www.bloggernoob.com
Tag line "Learn how to blog, make money online, make money blog." needs a little help. Make it more grammar correct and less keyword.
Do it for both. Put a little more effort into it besides creating a keyword list. Have it make sense, and include the keywords you want.