Review Dating Site please

I recently created two landing pages to promote a dating ebook. I would love to know from different sources and get an objectionable point of view on the sites, please be blunt if you must. .

http://bestwaytopickupwoman.com/

http://bestwaytopickupwoman.com/index2.html

 

It is kinda plain not really eye catching(not trying to be mean) but it is

 

The two site are the same and the header color is too gray .
why not make it more colorful .

 

You should get a professional template for the site and it would be good if
you had some testimonials on the page from some satisfied customers.

 

1. need Logo hearder
2. get a professional template
3. color scheme
4. Change the font size..

your site is really unprofessional to visit..

 

thanks for the feed backs so far, making changes and will resubmit . .

 

Looks like an ordinary document. Hope you'll find a professional design for your project to make it look attractive

 

Well I expect to see lots more images. What is clearly missing is a testimonial. Provide a solid reason why the person should buy. All the elements seem to be missing.

 

1.you need a good logo
2.you can add some cool colors to background,title and links.
3.you should apply a proffessional template and design .
4.I didnt like that image,add some good images.
5.Looks like a wordpad document,so better you can redesign the whole.thanks.

 

Good site friends

 

sry but I don't think that it is good... it's absolutely simple... not interesting for the most of people...

 

contact,terms &condition,etc.. still empty.you should add links.

 

Simple website and ugly DISGUSTING women