[Review] Brochure front and back cover

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  2. indeakid

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    Really nice picture in the bottom and the middle is quite good, but head is looking cheap and untasty, imo. Well, and there are too sharp colors, I think, but not sure, will it be the same on the paper.
     
    indeakid, Sep 25, 2008 IP
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    The brochure looks good however, I would suggest that you make the following changes:

    - Remove that negative space above the template.

    - It's difficult to read the green text with the white background, you should consider
    changing the color of the text to black.
     
    kingofsanda, Sep 25, 2008 IP