review amd comment

Discussion in 'Websites' started by ayaha, Sep 24, 2011.

  1. #1
    ayaha, Sep 24, 2011 IP
  2. LeonForLinks

    LeonForLinks Peon

    Messages:
    30
    Likes Received:
    0
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    #2
    Firstly, it is a little odd to have an English language website, but the title and domain name are not spelled correctly in English: "Girles" should "Girl's". It isn't clear if the blog is targetted at a particular segment - the title (kind of) suggests all girl's fashion, but the spelling and the asian look of the main piece on wedding jewellery suggest a more international bias - I think you should make it clear if you are writing about a specific area of girl's fashion - it will help your SEO, too.

    From a design point of view, the navigation menu on the left is too wide - the main content should have a bigger proportion of the screen area. Also, having a navigation menu across the top always looks good because it lets people quickly get an overview of what the site contains without having to scroll down a long page (most people won't bother).

    I'd also make the header smaller - the design is nice, but it takes available screen space away from the main content.

    Finally, the text in your "Popular Posts" column is "wrapped" around the images, but there isn't enough room, so it is doesn't wrap correctly - some is beside the image and some is below it, with a big gap in the middle of the text. I'd suggest (if you want to keep the images), put the text above or below the image and put some kind of divider between the items.

    Hope this helps.
     
    LeonForLinks, Sep 25, 2011 IP
  3. pcuser

    pcuser Greenhorn

    Messages:
    58
    Likes Received:
    0
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    18
    #3
    Blue is used too much, try to experiment with different colors especially since your blog is about "FASHION".
     
    pcuser, Sep 26, 2011 IP
  4. Dewan sohan

    Dewan sohan Member

    Messages:
    49
    Likes Received:
    0
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    36
    #4
    This really so smart and talents. Thanks who decorated this sites onpage SEO it's really targeted.
     
    Dewan sohan, Sep 27, 2011 IP
  5. smartblogz

    smartblogz Greenhorn

    Messages:
    78
    Likes Received:
    0
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    16
    #5
    Adjust the layout and you will be fine.
     
    smartblogz, Sep 27, 2011 IP
  6. dborreson

    dborreson Peon

    Messages:
    21
    Likes Received:
    1
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    #6
    A good start, but keep working on it. A few design and layout tweeks could make this site a success!
     
    dborreson, Sep 27, 2011 IP
  7. vampiro

    vampiro Peon

    Messages:
    176
    Likes Received:
    0
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    #7
    I agree with pcuser! Better start experimenting on colors as this is a fashion site. Try silver or gold border to blend with the jewelries...

    Try adding header and footer in the site. :)
     
    vampiro, Sep 27, 2011 IP
  8. jaan123

    jaan123 Peon

    Messages:
    27
    Likes Received:
    0
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    #8
    pretty good, might want to check the content for grammer
     
    jaan123, Oct 4, 2011 IP
  9. Flip2K

    Flip2K Peon

    Messages:
    23
    Likes Received:
    0
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    #9
    apart from the spelling is not correct, but i dont think this is an issue because if i understand it correctly you just want to use this as an adsense autoblog type site, which looks good for that sort of thing, good luck in it, it will defiantly bring some passive income
     
    Flip2K, Oct 4, 2011 IP
  10. redseo28

    redseo28 Greenhorn

    Messages:
    50
    Likes Received:
    0
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    16
    #10
    nice site but needs lot of hardwork
     
    redseo28, Oct 13, 2011 IP
  11. lelawati

    lelawati Peon

    Messages:
    21
    Likes Received:
    0
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    #11
    need defferent color..
     
    lelawati, Oct 15, 2011 IP
  12. britneyfansorg

    britneyfansorg Peon

    Messages:
    44
    Likes Received:
    0
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    #12
    try to make it colorful. and try to get a TLD
     
    britneyfansorg, Oct 17, 2011 IP
  13. coby786

    coby786 Peon

    Messages:
    22
    Likes Received:
    0
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    #13
    Nice website..Need to increase more traffic.

    best of luck....
     
    coby786, Oct 18, 2011 IP
  14. john chard

    john chard Peon

    Messages:
    85
    Likes Received:
    0
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    #14
    website is really good and very nice background.....
     
    john chard, Sep 22, 2012 IP
  15. RoundShots

    RoundShots Active Member

    Messages:
    231
    Likes Received:
    16
    Best Answers:
    1
    Trophy Points:
    80
    #15
    change the domain man.
     
    RoundShots, Sep 22, 2012 IP